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* Out Of This World * Book 1: A Spy on the Home Front

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Post by Scooter Sat 19 Sep 2009, 9:24 am

* Out of This World *


Book 1: A Spy on the Home Front


Fantasy: Aliens, seperate dimensions, ridiculously advanced technology
Maturity: Battles, blood (but not too gory, please), some romance if you must


A strange creature marches up the steps to a shiny red throne at the top of the hall.
Just as he makes to sit down on it, a powerful shockwave shakes the ground, knocking the King off his feet.
The King looks up from the ground to see a large spaceship through the gaping hole in the castle wall.

Inside the main cabin of the spaceship, the General laughs maniacally as he blasts the hole in the wall.
He watches as his soon-to-be rival glares up at the General's spaceship in surprise.
Understanding comes that the two are not to be allies and they both speak the same words simultaneously.

"It's time."

*ABOUT SLAGOVIA*
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*ABOUT THE KINGDOM*
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*ABOUT THE SPACEREALM*
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*ABOUT RANKING*
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*ABOUT THE CREATURES*
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*RULES
1) Follow all TWD RP rules.
2) Violence is permitted, but nothing too gory.
3) Please, minimal romance.
4) PM all forms to me, Scooter.
5) Please note that in Part I, the war hasn't started yet. This is simply the stage of great tension and mobilization. Do not start a battle, only small skermishes will be permitted.

*FORM:
Name:
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Age:
Good or Evil:
Species:
Appereance:
Personality:
Location: (Where in the Kingdom or SpaceRealm they live)
Rank: (1-4: please read about Ranking in the explinations)
Other:

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My form(exmaple):
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Characters (Dark Red for Evil and Dark Blue for Good)
Ebony Kengrish - female - age 17 - Rank 4 (Dreamer)
Yawzing - male - age 47 - Rank 4 (Scooter)
Clank - robot - age 10 (but it makes no difference) - Rank 4 (Scooter)


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Post by Dreamer Sat 26 Sep 2009, 11:40 am

[Hi Scott. I think you need to add a little more to the RP, such as the explination of the "Kingdom" and "SpaceRealm" and such. I know what it is, because I helped you come up with it, but other people might not. Wink
Anyway, I'm joining!

Name: Ebony Kengrish
Gender: Girl
Age: 17
Good or Evil: Evil
Species: Er, a humanoid type species. She looks like a human, mostly, but she's not. Smug
Appereance: Long, shiny black hair and pale skin. Tall and willowy. Vibrant purple eyes.
Personality: Keeps to herself. Ebony isn't the kind of person you want to mess around with, she's strong and has incredible superhuman powers. She has a horrible temper and takes pleasure in scaring others. ^^
Location: (Where in the Kingdom or SpaceRealm they live) Near the heart of the SpaceRealm kingdom.
Rank: (1-4) 4
Other: She is one of the General's most trusted advisors. ]
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Post by Scooter Tue 29 Jun 2010, 4:34 pm

((RP, Nadine?))
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Post by Dreamer Tue 29 Jun 2010, 4:50 pm

((Yay! I guess I'll start.))

A light fog hung in the air of the Kingdom marketplace. It was the early morning, and the crowds were thin. Ebony, a black cloak shrouding her thin, pale face, wandered through the marketplace. She was on a mission from the General as a spy.
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Post by Scooter Tue 29 Jun 2010, 4:58 pm

Yazing pried himself out of his comfortalbe armchair and slowly made his way to the door. He flung it open and groaned. He would have to see about having an elevator installed in this place. After walking down the stairs, Yawzing exited the apartment. He walked out of the castle grounds, nodding to the guards, and made his way through the rank three neighborhoods. He came to the marketplace and walked to the fruit stand. On his way there, he tripped over a rock and fell.
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Post by Dreamer Tue 29 Jun 2010, 5:04 pm

Ebony stared as an elderly man tripped and landed at her feet. Her instinct told her to kick him and leave him to die. However, acting as a respectable Kingdom citizen, she knew she, regrettingly, could not do such. But what should she do? She had never had training in etiquette and was at a complete loss.
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Post by Scooter Tue 29 Jun 2010, 5:07 pm

Yawzing moaned, thinking that he had probably broken something. He started to push himself up on his knees. Obviously the stranger before him was not going to help.
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Post by Dreamer Tue 29 Jun 2010, 5:10 pm

Ebony finally decided it was best to help him up. Cringing at her goodness, she held out her hand.
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Post by Scooter Wed 30 Jun 2010, 7:52 pm

Yawzing grabbed the strangers hand and pulled him self up .
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Post by Dreamer Wed 30 Jun 2010, 7:57 pm

Ebony quickly released the man's hand, ignorant of what germs the man did or did not have and wary about it.
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Post by Scooter Wed 30 Jun 2010, 8:10 pm

Yawzing thought that this preson was acting stangely ,all though maybe he thought that because was just reading to many mysteries.
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Post by Dreamer Wed 30 Jun 2010, 8:32 pm

Ebony was quite unsure of what to do. Finally, she asked, "Did you come from the palace?"
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Post by Scooter Wed 30 Jun 2010, 8:57 pm

"Yes" Yawzing said "yes I do " then he asked "Where do you live ?"
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Post by Dreamer Wed 30 Jun 2010, 9:02 pm

(( *cringes* SCOTT!! YOU HAVE AQUIRED A PUNCTUATION DEFICIENCY!!! MY OWN BROTHER!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHh!!!!!!!!!!! ))

"Oh, not too far from here. Are you very close to the king? You must be, to live on palace grounds."
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Post by Scooter Wed 30 Jun 2010, 9:17 pm

"Well I guess you could say that I am ,after all ,his adviser" Yawzing said "And the preson he talks to when he's in a bad mood" He added.
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Post by Dreamer Wed 30 Jun 2010, 9:23 pm

Ebony's heart lept. What luck! Such a person of importance and closeness to the King was the perfect person to report on for the General! She gave a tinkling laugh. "That's very nice. It sounds like you two are good friends."
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Post by Scooter Wed 30 Jun 2010, 9:40 pm

"Guess you could think of it that way... " Yawzing said "well good bye" And pretended to start walking over to the fruit stand. I have to fallow follow her , she is acting too stange to live here (she dosen't know even know I'm the kings adviser!) and the King is not letting any travelers in because of this great tension.
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Post by Dreamer Wed 30 Jun 2010, 10:06 pm

Ebony nodded, raising a hand in farewell. She set off at a brisk pace down the street.
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Post by Scooter Wed 30 Jun 2010, 10:19 pm

Yawing fallowed followed after her as fast and quietly as he could.

( You keep spelling it wrong, Scott! F-o-l-l-o-w. (:
-Nadine
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Post by Dreamer Wed 30 Jun 2010, 10:25 pm

Throwing a quick glance behind her, Ebony headed down a dark, empty alleyway.
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Post by Scooter Wed 30 Jun 2010, 10:34 pm

Yawzing steped partly into the ally and listened carefully.
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Post by Dreamer Wed 30 Jun 2010, 10:45 pm

Ebony snapped her fingers and a purple spark appeared in her hand. She blinked, and a purple spark floated from each eye into the one on her palm. She whispered, "First," and a spark flew from her mouth to the one in her hand. Then she snapped again, and the spark disappeared.
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Post by Scooter Tue 06 Jul 2010, 4:50 pm

That was werid ! Yawzing thought.
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Post by Dreamer Tue 06 Jul 2010, 5:01 pm

Done sending her report, Ebony's amethyst eyes flashed bright. Now, to find that man again and befriend him. He must possess much valuable information.
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Post by Scooter Tue 06 Jul 2010, 5:06 pm

Yawzing walked over to the friut stand wondering why the stranger had to run down a ally to say "first".
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