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Post by PeggySnow Sat 14 Aug 2010, 10:48 pm

Lilly smirked, and followed the boy. She was gret with self defense, if need be, her teeth like little razors...
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Post by Dreamer Sat 14 Aug 2010, 10:59 pm

Mark breezed through his backyard and started down a trail leading into the forest.
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Post by PeggySnow Sat 14 Aug 2010, 11:02 pm

Lilly looked around in wonder. She was enjoying herself, she had to admit.
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Post by Dreamer Sat 14 Aug 2010, 11:05 pm

Mark wasn't sure how he felt about Lilly yet, but he was determined to break through her protective shell and get to know the real person inside. He continued into the dense forest, eventually straying off trail. He glanced behind him to ensure that Lilly was still following.
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Post by PeggySnow Sat 14 Aug 2010, 11:07 pm

Lilly was still following Mark, thinking of how different this was. She liked Mark, he wasn't like other people who stared at her, and her dirty looks. He was mysterios.... Just like her.
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Post by Dreamer Sat 14 Aug 2010, 11:09 pm

Mark stopped at a massive oak with a hole in the trunk large enough to fit inside. He squeezed into it, and beckoned Lilly to follow. Then he clambered down the ladder he had installed into his earthy underground hideout.
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Post by PeggySnow Sat 14 Aug 2010, 11:12 pm

Lilly was mesmorized, as she followed Mark into the tree. "This is amazing," she murmered.
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Post by Dreamer Sat 14 Aug 2010, 11:17 pm

The walls were earthy; roots and rocks stuck out in places. The cozy space was occupied by a couch, a wooden cabinet, and a locked trunk. "Have a seat," said Mark, guesturing ((Okay, I know I'm spelling that wrong, but how is it really spelled? *sigh* )) to the couch.
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Post by PeggySnow Sat 14 Aug 2010, 11:24 pm

((I have that problem a lot. How is it spelled? Eye Roll))

Lilly looked around. "Wow, it's so cozy! I love it already," she said this as she sat down on the couch.
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Post by Dreamer Sat 14 Aug 2010, 11:28 pm

(( No idea, I'm too lazy to look it up. Eye Roll ))

Mark sat down beside her with a smile. "I did this myself," he said. "When I was fifteen, and I lived here with my father. He was always out on crime sprees, and would often come home drunk, so I needed a place to call my own. In the end he died of alcohol poisoning, but not until he led me to follow in his footsteps... but I stopped drinking a year ago. I don't want to die like he did."
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Post by PeggySnow Sat 14 Aug 2010, 11:41 pm

((Haha, me as well! Eye Roll))

"That's horrible!" Lilly gasped. "At least you stopped, which is great. Many people don't. My parents both died when I was twelve. Car accident. I guess it drove me mad, and, well, here I am." she looked away. "You, uh, did a great job with this place. It's really cozy. I like it."
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Post by Dreamer Sat 14 Aug 2010, 11:42 pm

Mark nodded, seeing that she didn't want to press the subject. "I'm really sorry about your parents," he murmured quickly, giving her a quick hug. "Er, thanks."
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Post by PeggySnow Sat 14 Aug 2010, 11:52 pm

"It's all right," she said, returning the quick hug.
She sat on her hands, and looked around the 'house' awkwardly. "So, do you live here? Or, do you have another home?"
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Post by Dreamer Sun 15 Aug 2010, 12:04 am

"Nah, that was my house back there, that I was sitting outside of. This is my thinking spot, my place to escape." He pulled at a frayed strand of demin from the ripped knees of his jeans, suddenly unable to meet her eye.
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Post by PeggySnow Sun 15 Aug 2010, 11:47 am

"Oh. I see..." she looked around in wonder. "So, er, does anyone else know about this?"
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Post by Dreamer Sun 15 Aug 2010, 5:45 pm

"No, actually," he replied. He suddenly realized how huge it was for him to bring someone down here, much less a girl, a girl he had just met.
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Post by PeggySnow Sun 15 Aug 2010, 5:47 pm

Lilly nodded. "Do you come here often?"
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Post by Dreamer Sun 15 Aug 2010, 7:07 pm

"Pretty much every day. Sometimes I stay in here for a day or two, when I need to think something through without distraction..."
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"Ah. I need a place like this. You know, to think things through..." Lilly said, understanding.
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Post by Dreamer Sun 15 Aug 2010, 8:41 pm

Mark nodded. "It's great. My secret place..."
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Post by PeggySnow Sun 15 Aug 2010, 8:49 pm

"Yeah, I don't see anyone ever finding it..." Lilly was now determined to change the subject. "So, uh, do you live alone? Or, do you have a girlfriend, or a roommate or something?"
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Post by Dreamer Sun 15 Aug 2010, 8:51 pm

"No, just me. I don't really have friends anymore, after my depression stage. A lot of girls like me now, but I haven't found the one yet."
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Post by PeggySnow Sun 15 Aug 2010, 8:55 pm

"Oh, I see. Well, I'm sure you will one day," Lilly said, with a bit of a smile. "Yeah, I guess some guys like me. Everytime I go out, they usually drool," she said, rolling her eyes.
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Post by Dreamer Sun 15 Aug 2010, 8:59 pm

I can see why... "A lot of guys are disgusting like that. They're probably all perverts, who don't care about personality."
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Post by PeggySnow Sun 15 Aug 2010, 9:04 pm

I can see why girls like you....
"Yes, exactly!" Lilly said. That was exactly it. "They always make disgusting comments as well! Part of the reason I always stay inside, and keep to myself."
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