Love is so blind
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Love is so blind
Chapter 1
Stacey was busy getting ready for her final party at ''The Space''
for 13 year olds and 14 year olds.Stacey had long blonde and brown eyes
and was turning 15 in the summer holidays.Stacey couldn't wait
because Callum would be there.Callum was also 14 and had short brown hair
and blue eyes.Stacey had been in love with Callum ever since she she
started ''The Space'' which was a year ago.
''Ok are you ready yet'' her mum said popping her head round the door.
''Yes'' Stacey replied
Stacey quickly got in the car and her mum drove her to ''My Space''.
She said goodbye to her mu once she got there and hurried inside just in time
to see Callum.
Chapter 2
Callum was wearing a black shirt with a tie and was wearing black jeans.
He was also wearing black shoes as well.
He certainly looked hot tonight.Just then Callum
walked straight past Stacey without looking at her.
Stacey however always loved him like crazy and didn't seem to notice.
When Stacey went into the building it was dark with lights going around the dance
floor.And there was music coming from a big speaker.Stacey looked at Callum and
Callum glanced at Stacey and then looked away again.
Soon it was karaoke time and Stacey went up on stage to try and impress
Callum.She was about to start singing when the fire alarm went off and they
all had to leave.That night was a disaster.
Chapter 3
''So how was the party?'' Stacey's mum asked
''A disaster'' Stacey replied angrily.
''How come?'' her mum asked
Stacey explained to her mum about Callum ignoring her to the part where the
fire alarm off.
''Well your right that was a disaster but at least you have a caravan holiday to look forward to'' her mum said.
''Yeah i guess your right'' Stacey said to her mum.
''I think you should just be yourself'' Bella said to Stacey the next day.
''And if he can't except who you are then...''
Before she could say the last word Stacey butted in.
''I'm not going to give up that easily'' Stacey said.
Just at that moment Stacey got a text from her other friend Carol.
After she had read it she looked shocked.
''Guess what'' she said to Bella
''Callum is going on the same holiday as me.''
Chapter 4
The day Stacey was leaving for the holiday she was so excited.
She couldn't wait to see Callum.While she was packing she stumbled
across a brown wig and then a thought struck her what if Callum was to
ignore her again.So she quickly stuffed the brown wig into her bag.
Just then Stacey's mum asked if she was ready to go.
Stacey nodded a little nervously and she went downstairs.She went in the car
and was quiet for the whole journey.
They finally got there at 2pm and went in the main building to get the keys for
the caravan but before they went without her mum noticing she stuffed the wig
in her jacket pocket.Then she made her way out of the car and into the main building
but just when she was in the building she stopped and stared.
Callum was here already.Stacey ducked behind a plant and took the wig
out of her pocket and put it on.
She then stood in the sitting room and Callum walked over to her.
''What's your name?'' Callum asked.
Stacey had to think fast she couldn't use her own name otherwise he would
know who she was.
Stacey was busy getting ready for her final party at ''The Space''
for 13 year olds and 14 year olds.Stacey had long blonde and brown eyes
and was turning 15 in the summer holidays.Stacey couldn't wait
because Callum would be there.Callum was also 14 and had short brown hair
and blue eyes.Stacey had been in love with Callum ever since she she
started ''The Space'' which was a year ago.
''Ok are you ready yet'' her mum said popping her head round the door.
''Yes'' Stacey replied
Stacey quickly got in the car and her mum drove her to ''My Space''.
She said goodbye to her mu once she got there and hurried inside just in time
to see Callum.
Chapter 2
Callum was wearing a black shirt with a tie and was wearing black jeans.
He was also wearing black shoes as well.
He certainly looked hot tonight.Just then Callum
walked straight past Stacey without looking at her.
Stacey however always loved him like crazy and didn't seem to notice.
When Stacey went into the building it was dark with lights going around the dance
floor.And there was music coming from a big speaker.Stacey looked at Callum and
Callum glanced at Stacey and then looked away again.
Soon it was karaoke time and Stacey went up on stage to try and impress
Callum.She was about to start singing when the fire alarm went off and they
all had to leave.That night was a disaster.
Chapter 3
''So how was the party?'' Stacey's mum asked
''A disaster'' Stacey replied angrily.
''How come?'' her mum asked
Stacey explained to her mum about Callum ignoring her to the part where the
fire alarm off.
''Well your right that was a disaster but at least you have a caravan holiday to look forward to'' her mum said.
''Yeah i guess your right'' Stacey said to her mum.
''I think you should just be yourself'' Bella said to Stacey the next day.
''And if he can't except who you are then...''
Before she could say the last word Stacey butted in.
''I'm not going to give up that easily'' Stacey said.
Just at that moment Stacey got a text from her other friend Carol.
After she had read it she looked shocked.
''Guess what'' she said to Bella
''Callum is going on the same holiday as me.''
Chapter 4
The day Stacey was leaving for the holiday she was so excited.
She couldn't wait to see Callum.While she was packing she stumbled
across a brown wig and then a thought struck her what if Callum was to
ignore her again.So she quickly stuffed the brown wig into her bag.
Just then Stacey's mum asked if she was ready to go.
Stacey nodded a little nervously and she went downstairs.She went in the car
and was quiet for the whole journey.
They finally got there at 2pm and went in the main building to get the keys for
the caravan but before they went without her mum noticing she stuffed the wig
in her jacket pocket.Then she made her way out of the car and into the main building
but just when she was in the building she stopped and stared.
Callum was here already.Stacey ducked behind a plant and took the wig
out of her pocket and put it on.
She then stood in the sitting room and Callum walked over to her.
''What's your name?'' Callum asked.
Stacey had to think fast she couldn't use her own name otherwise he would
know who she was.
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Aww... This sounds cute. I'm psyched to hear more.
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Thanks i can't wait to type chapter two.
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Hmm... Interesting. It's pretty good. A little constructive criticism: It's a little bit rushed... Maybe if you slowed it down just a tad.
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Hm... INteresting... What's gonna happen next?
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Yes, what IS going to happen? I certainly want to hear more. I agree with Lauren.
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Thanks i'll type more as soon as possible.
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what is goin to happen next may i ask
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yeah what is gonna happen next?
its REALLY good i cant wait to hear more
its REALLY good i cant wait to hear more
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