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Real Love Story : A song by Dream

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Post by Dreamer Mon 28 Sep 2009, 9:06 am

This is a song I wrote in 7th grade.. for those of you who don't know, I'm a total true romantic, and I find it near impossible not to dream about these kinds of romantic love stories. Eye Roll

Real Love Story

Here's a story bout a girl
Just walkin
Down the streets of her life

Here's a story bout a boy
Who needs some
Love in his life

Here's a story
When they meet,
Sparks fly

But this love story is unlike the others
The boy and the girl
Actually like eachother

[CHORUS]
No one gets hurt
And no one gets broken
No one gets left behind
Here's a story
You won't predict the ending
Cause it's actually kind
Everyone love story I've heard is a sad one
One of the lovers ends up with no one
Happy ending are rare but true
Don't doubt real love stories
Or they won't happen to you.


First they're just friends
Hangin
And chattin outside of school

They both have the same interests
And don't care
About being "cool"

Then they finally realize
Friendship isn't
What they're feeling inside

[CHORUS]
No one gets hurt
And no one gets broken
No one gets left behind
Here's a story
You won't predict the ending
Cause it's actually kind
Everyone love story I've heard is a sad one
One of the lovers ends up with no one
Happy ending are rare but true
Don't doubt real love stories
Or they won't happen to you.


[BRIDGE]
Don’t you wish
Every love story
Was as real as this
Don’t you see
This is how
Everyone’s life should be

[quieter]
No one gets hurt and
No one gets broken
No one gets left behind
Here’s a story
You won’t predict the endin’
[louder]
Cause it’s actually kind
Every love story I’ve heard
Is a sad one
One of the lovers
Ends up with no one
Happy endings are rare but true
Don’t doubt real love stories
Or they won’t happen -
No one gets hurt and
No one gets broken
No one gets left behind
Here’s a story
You won’t predict the endin’
Cuz’ it’s actually kind
Every love story I’ve heard
Is a sad one
One of the lovers
Ends up with no one
Happy endings are rare but true
Don’t doubt real love stories
Or they won’t happen to you.

Don’t doubt a love story
This is a real love story

It’s true.
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Post by Bela Kiss Mon 28 Sep 2009, 1:48 pm

It's good, but the romance content is too high for me. Real Love Story : A song by Dream Icon_albino No surprise there. Real Love Story : A song by Dream Icon_cat
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Post by Dreamer Mon 28 Sep 2009, 2:25 pm

Lol Eye Roll The only thing we're not twin-ful about, is that you're disgusted by romance and I'm such a true romantic. xD But other than that, we're evil twins >=D
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Post by Tolly12bells Mon 28 Sep 2009, 7:25 pm

LOL! You two deeply amuse me. Eye Roll But the song was great! I'm a real romantic too. Really sweet. I love it, because those are always the most amazing times. Just that 'Meant To Be' feeling. Nod
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Post by Dreamer Mon 28 Sep 2009, 8:07 pm

Nod Yeah, if only I had experienced something like that. xD
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Post by OneTreeHill! Mon 28 Sep 2009, 9:58 pm

I like it! It was very easy to find a beat to!
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Post by Dreamer Tue 29 Sep 2009, 7:43 am

I rather like the tune I made up for it. ^^ If only I knew how to actually write music. Then I would write it down. But, I don't. I can only sort of read guitar music..
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Post by PeggySnow Wed 30 Sep 2009, 6:41 pm

Wow, that was extremely good! Nice job! Very Happy
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Post by Tolly12bells Wed 30 Sep 2009, 10:15 pm

Dreamer wrote:I rather like the tune I made up for it. ^^ If only I knew how to actually write music. Then I would write it down. But, I don't. I can only sort of read guitar music..
Hmm... Wish I could show you because I'm quite fluent at reading music. But I don't think I'm able to... xD Right now I'm actually taking a class about writing music. Nod
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Post by PeggySnow Thu 01 Oct 2009, 8:34 pm

Oh cool, Lauren! I've no idea how to write music. My friend plays the flute..
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Post by Tolly12bells Fri 02 Oct 2009, 10:54 pm

Thanks! I think I might be able to explain it, but it might be pointless because she probably doesn't know which note it starts on. Oh well. xD
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Post by Dreamer Sat 03 Oct 2009, 9:20 am

xD I could probably figure it out, but it might take a while. It's the same note for the first three, then down one, then down one again, then down again, then down again, then same, then up one, up again, up again, up, same, same, down, down, down. Then that same tune over again for the next line, and then for the third line, it starts the same: same note for the first three, then down one, then down one again, then down again, down again, (and here it gets different) up, up, up, then down, down, up, same, same, same, up, same, up, down, down, up, down, up, same, same, same, same, same, same, up, down, down.
And then we go into the chorus...
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Post by Tolly12bells Sat 03 Oct 2009, 1:14 pm

Alright... Let me see...

So you have five lines right? The very bottom line, if there's a note on that one, is an E. Erm, let me just find a picture to explain...

Real Love Story : A song by Dream Blanksheetmusicsmaller
OK, so now, you see the five lines and spaces right? Well that very bottom line, is an E note, as is the top space. (The one in between the two top lines) So you have the bottom line. The space above it is an F. Simple enough right? Then the line above that, is a G. Then the space is an A again, then the line a B, then the space a C, then line a D, then space an E, then the top line an F. Now here's where it gets a bit tricky. What if you want it to go higher than an F? You put it on the space above the F so that it looks like it's sitting on top of the line. Still want it higher? Draw a little line above the note you've just written, and write another note on that line. And so on, switching between lines and spaces. (Mind you, this is all in the Treble Clef)

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OK, now here, we start on the bottom line where you see the first clearly printed notes.
That first on on the bottom space, is a...
*Guess here*

F if you guessed F, you've got it. I hope this helped you a little bit. You still just need to know which note it starts on, then work your way from there. Nod Good luck.
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Post by PeggySnow Sat 03 Oct 2009, 5:35 pm

Very nice, Lauren!
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Post by Dreamer Sat 03 Oct 2009, 5:47 pm

Wow, thanks Lauren!! ^^ Now I need to figure out what note it starts on. xD
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Post by Tolly12bells Sat 03 Oct 2009, 5:56 pm

Welcome! Yeah... xD That's where it's difficult. Nod
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Post by Dreamer Sun 04 Oct 2009, 9:20 am

I figure it must start kinda high, because I go down like four notes in the beginning and all.. *shrugs*
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Post by Tolly12bells Sun 04 Oct 2009, 1:01 pm

Hmm... When I do stuff I just experiment with a bunch of notes. And chose which one sounds best. Nod
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Post by Dreamer Sun 04 Oct 2009, 4:53 pm

Okay, I'll try that. I know some piano notes, would that help? Like if I tried to match the sound the piano makes the my voice? xD Ah, stupid idea. Eye Roll
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Post by Tolly12bells Sun 04 Oct 2009, 6:50 pm

No! Not a stupid idea at all! That's what I do, depending on which house I'm at. Piano at Dad's, and Violin at Mum's. Just sing your note, and screw around on the keyboard till you find the right one.
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Post by agathachristie Wed 07 Oct 2009, 6:54 pm

Great song! You are very creative!
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Post by Dreamer Wed 07 Oct 2009, 9:02 pm

Tolly12bells wrote:No! Not a stupid idea at all! That's what I do, depending on which house I'm at. Piano at Dad's, and Violin at Mum's. Just sing your note, and screw around on the keyboard till you find the right one.
Oh! Okay! Silly *runs upstairs to room and tries to figure song out on keyboard*

agathachristie wrote:Great song! You are very creative!
Thank you! Smile
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Post by Tolly12bells Wed 07 Oct 2009, 9:54 pm

LOL! You'll probably lose some brain cells in the process, but at least you'll feel smarter. xD
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Post by Dreamer Thu 08 Oct 2009, 7:26 am

xD Yup. Silly
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Post by Moony Tue 20 Oct 2009, 8:21 pm

OMGZ, Amazing Dream! >;D
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